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    Apache

    Here is Toks map Apache click on this link

    www.geocities.com/shepzero/Apache.zip


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    goto http://www.geocities.com/shepzero/ as direct link does not work cos geocities being n00bs

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    A bit small, but some not bad architecture, especially a few of those pillars in the middle area.

    Try to expand a bit for your next map, but keep the same kind of detail.

    The gameplay is very simple, but its clear that you've put some effort into tuning the map.
    Butemam! Gonomes? Revive?

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    Exclamation im sorry

    WOW, what a map, i got bored trying ot kill the apache and the map was alittle to small and not fun. I evnetually killed it but nothing happend, i was just stuck there......not much of a map





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    Huxtable he doesnt need that much sarcasm....and how about a little suggestions for him?

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    Ok

    Ok ok sorry. First off i like the respond, well planned out. I think the outside arena where the apache is should be larger with alittle more walls and stuff. There should be more weapon choice and more Areas to hit the apache with. More types of enemies and less health for the apache.

    I liked the texures and such , along with the respond.


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    oh....my......god....

    This map is horrible, agian, a sad excuse for a map where you are supposed to be "immersed"

    The appache doesnt move, and you cant damage it,way to many hwgrunts,horrid textureing, horrible arcitechure,and the doorway to the medkit makes me feel like alice in wonderland ( its fuckin SMALL you gotta crouch) this map wasnt beta tested. and it shows, tok get away from worldcraft NOW

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    Original Prankster stop trying to be like Corona, you never will be so why try.
    I've seen you do this a few times, and you put no real constructive critism, Corona actually says whats wrong and HOW to make it better.
    All you're doing is just coming in and saying

    "OMG It's all HORRIBLE, OMG QUIT MAPPING NOW!!!1"

    Which is in my book flaming, and I've yet to see you release any great maps so maybe you should just keep it shut from now on if you're not going to post anything helpful.
    You also shouldn't call yourself a map reviewer, they're not reviews, they're just immature little rants.
    And yes, this is an official warning.

    The OP is a nub

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    I agree with The-Real-Game !

    Every mapper did his first map and sure it wasn't good. So they need our help because we can tell them what they should do better and what is good.

    Skills will get better and then... wooh... what a nice map
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    well, bye the way it sounds, i tihnk ill like it *click on dll*
    i like small, annoying maps, gets me stressed so i can hit my sis hard

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    Originally posted by Original|Prankster
    oh....my......god....

    Tok get away from worldcraft NOW
    Hey, thanks for the nice comments ! Some really helpfull support for a just beginning mapper ! I love it when people are so nice to new mappers just to share everything you know with them so they can advance in their skills !


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    Originally posted by Hezus


    Hey, thanks for the nice comments ! Some really helpfull support for a just beginning mapper ! I love it when people are so nice to new mappers just to share everything you know with them so they can advance in their skills !

    Yeah, I have to agree with Hezus, you need to tell them what they did wrong, and tell them how to fix it so people like the map (or model, depending on what the subject it). Just saying "it sux" or "dont map ever again!" its worth anything. If that's all your gonna do, then just don't post. Be nice to beginners. You were there once.

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    Sorry people..

    I never have seen this topic after the first message i think...

    well.. i have already the fully new apache

    Your link is coming fast!
    but this aint a apache:P

    But theres a small mappack coming up...
    Garglab is also in it...

    it are 2 old maps
    but they say.. they are very fun

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    You have show me this map before right, Tok?

    I'll say it needs a little more work, like make it bigger and more hiding places.


    ps. Niet te veel van dat flaming aantrekken, iedereen maakt dat mee ... so anyways Good Job!
    Last edited by Sph!nx; 04-04-2003 at 04:28 AM.

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    Good start

    Not bad, but definitely could be longer. A button on the outside would help or have door stay open. Can't get back inside without dieing. I see you have a door outside, maybe for expansion? Looks nice so you do have talent. Didn't get any lag, which is always a plus. If the apache at least rotated it would increase gameplay a bit. Machinegunners were a good surprise. I don't think more cover would be needed that'd just make it too easy to just pot-shot the apache down. I think it's a good start showing promise. Stay with it.

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    well .. it isnt SO BAD i like it

    ill give both maps 6.5 out of 10

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    how ya guys mean? u already know these maps?

    ah well.. i updated apache...
    but now WC wont work anymore

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    You are in my MSN dude.
    You send me the map a couple of months ago

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    Originally posted by cscarlet
    goto http://www.geocities.com/shepzero/ as direct link does not work cos geocities being n00bs
    OFFTOPIC:
    Yeah, every webspaceprovider does that now. What you can do when you get an error is to add a space last in the url (after the P in .ZIP) and then press enter.

    ONTOPIC:
    I'll check out the map, maybe I'll have some comments later...

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    im keeping my above comment, the map is horrbile, textureing, enemy positioning, LENGTH, lighting, arcitechure, ect, i would rate this map, AT HIGHEST 2/10, i would of gave it 1/10 but atleast it isnt a hollowed out box.

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    This download is not the good version!

    the new mappack will have Garglab and Apache
    the newest from apache and Garglab beta

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    Originally posted by Original|Prankster
    im keeping my above comment, the map is horrbile, textureing, enemy positioning, LENGTH, lighting, arcitechure, ect, i would rate this map, AT HIGHEST 2/10, i would of gave it 1/10 but atleast it isnt a hollowed out box.
    C'mon man ... you are a great help for Tok

    Better give some advice or keep your mouth.
    He's obviosly(spelled?) a beginner and he need some help
    and flaming does not help!

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    I dont know, the map has alot of potential. Maybe if you made it alittle longer THEN you fight the big apache it would improve the map. Archetexture isnt so bad but i think you overused the HW grunts, mix it up alittle. I dont know why the apache dosnet move, im not a mapper so i cant help you with that, but others might be able too. [Players perspective]

    I myself have trouble making a box in WC so i cant critize the mapping when i cant even make ammo boxes!!

    GOod start!


    PS. for some reason the map dosent show in my "create game" mapcycle.

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    Plz Read this!

    This aint the Apache from now!!

    new screens coming soon



    sphinx wana uplaod some pics plz?

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    Hey let's find Prankster's first map (if he has/can even do one) and tell him:
    "OMG LOL WHAT A N00B MAPPER EVERYTHING IS HORRIBLE LOL FUCK YOU YOU CANT DO ANYTHING LOL STOP USING WORLDCRAFT NOW MAPPING ISNT FOR YOU THIS IS THE WORST MAP IVE EVER SEEN STFU WTF OMG ROFLOLMAO!11!!11!1!!!!!!!!"
    Did teachers tell you:
    "UR STUPID LOL YOU DONT KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT ENLGISH GET OUT OF HERE YOU N00B!"
    when you wrote a word wrong when you just learned how to write?
    Quote Originally Posted by RetroFish View Post
    Hey guys remember when maps/games were made because the creator wanted to make them, and not because of what people wanted to play?

    That was great.

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